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May 30, 2013

The Chocolate Palace

The Chocolate Palace


            There was a little girl named Lily who loves chocolate very much. One day after her father  returned from work he gave her two chocolate bars. Lily was very happy and she said thank you for her father.
            “Daddy,  thank you for giving me these chocolate bars. You are the best Daddy in the world” Lily said
            “ but remember what should we do after eat these chocolate bars, little princess?” her daddy asked
            “ We should have to brush our theeth, Daddy” lily answerd
            “ good girl”
            Then, Lily went to sleep and her mother read her a bedtime story until lily fell asleep.        Her mother thought that Lily was sleeping so her mother left her in bedroom alone. After the mother left Lili woke up and go to the kitchen to got chocolate in the refrigator.
            When Lily opened the refrigator and she took the chocolate bar from her father suddenly she pushed into refrigator until she realized that she was in the other place, the place which she had never seen before. The place is so cold and she saw snow everywhere.
            From a distance Lily saw a brown palace. She wondered so she went to the palace and entered into it. Suddenly Lily was surprised to see a lot of candies  and chocolates in the cute jars. Lily couldn’t wait to eat all of the especially chocolate, her favorite food. Then, she took the heart shaped chocolate in the pink jar and she ate it immediately. A few minutes later suddenly Lily turned into the little princess with a pretty dress. Lily was very happy that she ate too much chocolate in that palace. She ate chocolate candy, chocolate cake, chocolate biscuit and she tried all chocolate in that palace. But not long afterward when she drunk the hot chocolate she remembered her parents, and then she wanted to go home and back to the chocolate palace with her parents. Suddenly she turn back into Lily used to be,  she was home in front of refrigator in the kitchen. Her mother still woke up and heard some noises in the kitchen, she didn’t know that was Lili there.
“Who is there?” asked her mother. Lily run into the bedroom and she pretended to sleep, Lily forgot to brush her theeth until she fell asleep.
            The Next morning Lili woke up and she got a toothache, her mother found lily was crying and Lily felt sorry because she ate  too much chocolate last night and forgot to brush her theet.
            “Mommy I feel sorry because I ate too much chocolate last night and I forgot to brush my theeth” lily said while crying
            “oh my sweety, let’s go to the dentist.” Lily’s mother said

            Since then Lily never ate chocolate or candy too much not only that Lily also thought that to be a princess she always remember to brush her theet  to keep  healthy and beautiful.

Jatinangor,  May 31 2013

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